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[invertedtime.livejournal.com]

Title: But It's You
Rating: K+
Disclaimer: I do not own National Treasure. Nor do I own Carbon Leaf's "Life Less Ordinary" from which the italicized lyrics are borrowed.

This wasn't proof read by anyone other than me :P. Please point out any grammatical errors. And constructive criticism is welcome.



Well I hate to be a bother…

“Ben?”

Ben looked up from the book he’d been studying. “Yes, Riley?”

“Ben, I...” It was now or never. Riley swallowed and looked Ben in the eye. “I want to kiss you.”

Ben leaned forward. “You’re serious?”

Riley gave a nervous smile. “Yeah…I am.”

Ben was up and out of his chair before Riley could say anything else. “Good enough for me.” He grinned and pulled the younger man into a kiss.

Riley never looked back.

But it’s you and there’s no other, I do believe.


Good? Bad? Good idea, bad execution? The reverse? Lemme know!

Comments

yey!

[renony91.livejournal.com]

pretty... Nobody has written anything with these two in soooooo long and i'm glad the first few things i read were good. Your other one was good too but i jus didn't compliment on that one. So keep up the good work and you may even inspire this lurker to write something...

Re: yey!

[invertedtime.livejournal.com]

Thank you! And please write. I'm posting as many links to "inspiration" as I can find :).