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treasure_geeks2008-01-29 06:11 pm
Hey, Newbie post!
Fic: Twin View
Rating: PG to be safe
Read Ben's first, it goes in order!
With ColdPlay's The Scientist lyrics.
Come up to meet you, tell you I'm sorry
You don't know how lovely you are.
I had to find you, tell you I need you,
Tell you I set you apart.Ben made his way up the stairs to Riley's flat, staring at his feet the whole time.
His converses made a schush noise on the floor.
He was carrying a parcel in his left hand
and his right was rubbing his temples.
How would he react? He needed to tell Riley he...never mind.
Tell me your secrets and ask me your questions,
Oh lets go back to the start.
Running in circles, Comin' up Tails
Heads on a science apart.He wished that Riley would speak to him more, share some more feelings.
He wished that they could start something new, something special.
__________________________________________________________________________________I was just guessin' at numbers and figures,
Pulling your puzzles apart.
Questions of science, science and progress
Do not speak as loud as my heart.Riley put away his laptop, and sighed. Lying backwards on the bed, he tried to get to sleep.
Except he would have done, if he couldn't stop making calculations that ended with Ben.
E=MC Ben.
X+3x2= Ben
His brain was scrambled, worrying about Ben.
Would he turn up? His heart was deafening.
Boom-Boom Boom-Boom
And tell me you love me, come back and haunt me
Oh and I rush to the start.
Runnin' in circles, Chasin' up Tails
Comin' back as we areHe desperately wanted to hear them words from his lover's mouth. I. Love. You.
Maybe he was just young, but he wanted it so much it hurt.
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I like this. Just one complaint: the layout is a teensy bit funky. But the content is good. Keep writing!
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Awe, that was so sad/sweet. I like how you touched on the disconnect in communication; both men wish the other would say The Words. And the math equations? Nice detail there. :]
If I may make a suggestion? Try moving the bar/break so it's included in one of the livejournal cuts and not in the body of the post. :D That way, the layout won't be funky. <3
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I was a noob like...a week ago.
In any case, it's luuurve. :)
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:D